PRISON LIFE / $Y$T3M V!RU$

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Here i sit both night and day
/becoming part of the prison way
/waiting 4 the day that is generally known
/as in the day in which u go back home
/ think of the good times
/think of the bad times
/ think of the places that could be good crimes
/ study my plans routes and details
/ knowing at all nothing would fail
/ step threw a door and trip on sum wire
/ be for i fade out i hear the sound of tire
/sirens blazing blue lights flashing
inside i cant beleive this shit is happening
/bang go the dreams
the dreams i had thought
/ the old bill r near and im goiner get caught
/ so i run a up the stairs 'smash the glass
/ over the roof tops
i travel so fast
/stop so sudden outta my breath
,thought id taken over the very edge
wake up glad it was only a dream
/ boy o boy am i glad it was only a scheme
and just wait 4 the day that im released
/cause if i could have 3 wishes and they cauld come true
id ask the gennie to start me of new
/id ask 4 a job a house and a wife
instead of this
/ what they call PRISON LIFE repeat
instead of this
/ what they call PRISON LIFE

part 2 to be released in one month


$Y$T3M V!RU$

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Hmmm ,a rhyme about being a criminal scumbag.
Bigging up criminal activities is for complete morons.
How about rapping about something positive for a change.
Ganster rap, more like wankster rap.



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Ganster rap, more like wankster rap.

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who knows i find out on 7th

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hehehehheheh cosmic u make me lauff

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not being funny but your comments on this are abit OTT as you listen to alot of D&B and Grime music its all attitude the beats and the basslines dont sound right with a soft attitude you have to bring lyrics raw nowadays

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cosmic, easy on the verbal assualt did ya actually read the whole thing, cause if u did then u would realize i wasnt bigging up any one, and if u really want postive lyrics, try learning it your self, and set an exsample instead of slating that of which you clearly dont understand Mr Gangster... but nough said and you are free to reply but think b4 u type

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i hav 2 agree thou it wasnt actually biggin up criminals.......... personally i write my lyrics on experience n as most of ya no i was a bit of a shit growin up so sum of mine are about crime but in no way wuld i eva big it up............. ne ways positive lyrics are gud cosmic 2 true

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all lyrics are good and alot of the people that write dark lyrics have usualy ben bought up through a rough time and its the way of gettin the load of there minds alot of peeps wont like it but if its what ya have been through its what ya gonna write otherwise alot of peeps would just be doing nursery rhymes.. i used to MC myself and some of my lyrics were dark but like i say its what ya have been through and its a easy way of expressin shite life

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OK, so you're inside,
You got caught and then you failed,
Maybe as a consequence of shit that you inhaled,
Or maybe was it that you thought
It didn't change a thing,
You've done it oh so many times
Now you're on Cat A wing.
So for whatever reason
You're on that side of the wall,
If you climb too high and lose your balance
You will fall,
So don't write out for jail-mail
To mags, and people who,
You hope to fool and make them think
You love them, with your only tool,
The 'woe is me', please send me
One more post order of ten quid,
'Cos all you scumbags in your prison
Never, ever did,
Show your love,
Until you were alone there, in your cell,
So lockup, cellbound, call it what you want,
Go sit in hell.

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Devilscurse, I think you are so right with what you say about people being in a dark situation when they MC and write stuff, only I wish they'd let down the front and be more real about it!